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This topic has been highlighted by bumba89 at 11-17-2009 10:43 PM.
Well,i decided i will leave the writing of battle reports for a while if i'm selected,lol.In the meantime,the story i written might come today or later.I got a new project.


Melaxanum Intripidus Codexus



This codex is written to honor our origin,and this codex is the first among the first.May our codex guide our children not to act as us that had caused much of our suffering.

History List

The Global Crisis
The Discovery of Warp Core
The Day We Left Earth



will add more later~  
Raw imaginative power with split-second evolution~
Balance is out of the equation~
Sincerely,Gliese~

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First Cataclysm War

Revelation of Revolution



"Emperor,what is the meaning of this?! We lost our Third Capital due to some silly malfunction of your property!" angered Yan.

"Now,now,it is not my fault,it's the fault of the faulty device,you know that i despise them." answered the Emperor calmly.

"Now,Yan,I'm sure the Emperor have ways dealing of the problem." inferred Darius.

Without warning,Darius shot a tranquiliser dart accurately to hit Yan's neck.With that action,Yan quickly succumbed to the effect of the drug,collapsed in an instant.

"Well,Emperor,what you will assure us on your end of the bargain?" asked Darius.

"Firstly,take that mouthy person out,i will assure that Cadel will be trialed accordingly."

"And if the citizen suspects?"

"Nah,they're loyal to me,well,i got no evil intentions as your complicated words might say.Kadry,hmph,all you say is brag and drag with no avail."

"Oho,it's our way of sincerity and on how we handle people,well,I'm unlike those plegic Administrative Officials,Emperor." grinned Darius.

"Hmm...so,your end of the bargain is done yet?"

"Well,Emperor,patience is a part of virtue." smirked Darius.

With that,Darius leaves the room while dragging Yan along.There,the Emperor observed from a distance,thinking on how to manage the crisis.With great resplendence,news regarding the incident spreads as fast as wildfire in the galactic arena of information.Stocks falling record low as investors panicky sold their share as fear of oncoming war.Widespread panic erupted,goods prices run high and paranoia flows freely like water.This incident do benefits the traders,as they horde the goods,they are able to charge heavier prices on consumers.To escape from the impending goods shortage,the Rayman Empire opted to trade more heavily and more open with the capitalist Kadry Group.More contract signed and signed saw much of the Rayman massive riches shrinking day per day.To cope with the increasing prices of the goods and demands,the Emperor opted to lease a few territories to the Kadry Group as a payment for trading with the Rayman Empire.

"Here,Cadel,you're arrested on account of jeopardizing the Empire security and caused a major incident that inflict massive lost of life.Do not resist!"

"But,guards! I don't do anything wrong! It's not my fault!" screamed Cadel with panic influence.

Cadel resisted with much of his might to prevent from captured by the Inquisitorial Guards.Being caught by them is just the same being sentenced to death,as they're merciless and will show no mercy whatsoever.Captured suspect can be kept on prison without trial or any appropriate reasons for several cycles.They're the major security force in Rayman Empire,working stealthy unnoticed from the general populace.Captured suspect is erased from the minds of the populace by subliminal messaging broadcasted across the Rayman Empire,in fact,90% of the Rayman Empire mass media is filled by subliminal messaging.This method is used to keep the local populace loyalty to the Emperor and create forced control.Only the Emperor itself is not affected.

"I request extraction of Prisoner 1ER and D2G."

"Darius,you know you can't just barge in,they're going to be trialed soon."

"Micheal,i know you as the only good Inquisitorial Guard I've met,why you can't help me? I have the official letter from the Kadry Administrative Section,Micheal."

"Hmm...well.." as Micheal tries to talk several officials suddenly appeared from behind Darius without Darius acknowledgment.It caught them both at a surprise.Chairman Aral appeared amongst the mysterious figures.

"Well,Darius,Cadel will be brought out on the Militarie Segmentus for extraction and Eravan on the other hand will be put into close monitoring." speaks Chairman Aral

"And for you,Micheal,you will be reseted.Do not resist." speaks one of the Elite Inquisitorial Guard while dragging Micheal away.Micheal also tries to struggle vehemently and escape but his effort is halted as the Guard stunned him with a high-powered taser.

"Uh..Chairman,isn't they a bit cruel on humans?"

"Darius,it's their business,no need for us to interfere.Just be grateful that we're not drawn into their ideology maelstrom"

With the event quickly vanish as it surfaced,Darius and Chairman Aral left the scene.With great sleek,Chairman Aral quietly whipers something all the time,unnoticed.He was a busy man,constantly answering and making calls,from normal chatter to info regarding nation secrets,almost no topic left untouched by him.Being a successful Independent politician,Chairman Aral supported most of Kadry Group legislative actions.

"Good job,Callese,be ready for the next mission." whispered Chairman Aral

"Ok sir,resuming normal routines."

"Now,then,we gather here to expose the tyrannical rule of the Emperor!"

"But,sir,we demand a suitable evidence before we even consider to hear your word."

"Now,now then,council,you even know what the Emperor does right? Your land is being sold for a bunch of what? Some crappy goods to fill rich people stomach! Do you ever think of your future? Do you ever think what will you gain in the future!??" angered Chairman Aral.

The residing council faced a distress.For now they must decide,either face their eventual doom or accept to be labeled as a traitor.Either outcome brings the same end for them.Death,from execution or death from own inability to pull self from economic meltdown.They inferred and quarreled with each other,with each one undecided of what to choose.

"We decided,we will support your move,so,show us your initiative then,Chairman Aral."

"Oh,council,I shall not be disappoint you,for now,I present you the true colors of the tyrannical despot of Rayman!" smirked Chairman Aral.

Such gullible minds,haha, seems like i will get something again

With enthusiastic face,Chairman Aral explained of his grand scheme.Little that they know that Chairman Aral have planned something real big,unfathomable of their limited conscience.

"Flash News,the seven system on the Auriga Fringe had recently declared unilateral independence.They're resisting any diplomatic ties and any effort to contact them is met with heavy resistance.On the 2nd Rayln Economic Board,stock shares are falling rock bottom,the Rayman Treasury recently announced that...."

"Emperor! We must evacuate now!" screamed one of the Emperor private guard.

"What? I'm trying to sleep,you idiot,sigh.." sneered the Emperor.

"Emperor,the populace is rebelling,a huge revolt just broke out! The Inquisitorial Guards cannot hold them any much longer!"

With huge wave of chaos,revolution landed on the atmosphere of Arogonea.The local populace of which kept hypnotized by the Rayman 3rd Mass Media Centre suddenly turned violent and destroys anything that resisted them.All of them have one goal,to slain the Emperor.

"Hello Emperor,I hope you're fine.Sorry,this might seem uncomfortable,but I'm here to offer you a trade." smiled Chairman Aral while pointing a plasma gun at the Emperor's head from behind.

"Why,you! Aral?!!" frightened the Emperor.

[ Last edited by VartumCorp at 11-13-2009 05:17 AM ]
Raw imaginative power with split-second evolution~
Balance is out of the equation~
Sincerely,Gliese~

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Nice!

Nice and gripping storyline.

Minor gramatical problems here and there but that is expected.

I just hope u finish all ur stories. I always have this "ZomG what will happen next?!" only to find another story. kinda confusing and saddening.

Hope u could continue them when u become a jounalist!

"Truth is but a shattered mirror, strewn into myriad bits. With each person believing his own little piece is the whole truth."

Rayman Forever...(=
AzraIel (Libra)
Azrael (Leo)

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Original posted by Azrael23 at 11-13-2009 04:04 AM

I just hope u finish all ur stories. I always have this "ZomG what will happen next?!" only to find another story. kinda confusing and saddening.
Sorry,i can't really write stories on time reliably,i tend to write anything that i have in mind often at random times.

As the thread title suggest,the thread content can vary rapidly,so traverse at your own risk,sorry i can't do anything regarding them.

Anyhow,thank you for your comment! I hope i got enough ideas and time to actually finish the story,lol.And,so The First Cataclysm War is nearing the end and will start on a new chapter of the Second Cataclysm War.
Raw imaginative power with split-second evolution~
Balance is out of the equation~
Sincerely,Gliese~

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Quote:
Nice and gripping storyline.
what? storyline do the grapple? I'm confused....

By next week,the thread wont be updated as usual as i got some rl stuff going on and will lose net for a few days,feeling that i should really avoid this (but i cant),i *might* release more than 2 articles as late as on 21 of November~  
Raw imaginative power with split-second evolution~
Balance is out of the equation~
Sincerely,Gliese~

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well it meant that u have a good basis for a good story. just continue piling up chapte per chapter and ull b fine.. (=

GL on real life..
"Truth is but a shattered mirror, strewn into myriad bits. With each person believing his own little piece is the whole truth."

Rayman Forever...(=
AzraIel (Libra)
Azrael (Leo)

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Sort out your articles please,it will make players more easy to read.

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ok,the complete post will be relocated,while the incomplete ones *might* not move or just vanish/organised alongside with this thread

[ Last edited by VartumCorp at 11-18-2009 04:35 AM ]
Raw imaginative power with split-second evolution~
Balance is out of the equation~
Sincerely,Gliese~

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